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Green_Jade
05-04-2003, 07:14 PM
mmm my new flash webpage :)
go lookie

medical illustration stuffs..rock (http://www.rit.edu/~hjy2444/flash/flasweb.html)

feedback is welcomed.. and it's ok to be frank.

kitty
05-04-2003, 07:29 PM
it's really nice... I love your gallery stuff. I wonder if maybe you thought about another background colour because the grey and the brown is not very exciting together... but it definitely looks professional.

mr. x
05-05-2003, 06:37 PM
needs a game, like "navigate the body!" or something

jk, its nice

ism
05-06-2003, 02:43 PM
There is a game! The carpal puzzle was cute. =)

I really dig the cataract surgery animation -- the sagittal view was a nice touch that really makes it polished. Traditional illustrations are engaging and clear; couldn't ask for more than that.

The website itself, I think the gray and brown is fine -- quite clean and neutral -- which is good since it won't interfere with the gallery/portfolio presentation. I would suggest, however, if possible, to introduce some bolder colors in the non-gallery sections. Maybe change the background color (and that neuron thingy?) on each section change.

* fingertips of V hands are placed together and pulled apart
* thumbs up
* both hands palm down, right S hand hits back of left S hand

Green_Jade
05-07-2003, 02:15 PM
hehe.. the cataract surgery has an error... making/layer issue has caused the instruments to go under the iris...instead of over the iris, under the conea..boo... still fighting w/ it..

Green_Jade
05-07-2003, 02:18 PM
Originally posted by ism@May 6 2003, 04:43 PM


* fingertips of V hands are placed together and pulled apart
* thumbs up
* both hands palm down, right S hand hits back of left S hand
"very nice work" in sign language?? or i'm imagining it.. sounds like english signs tho.... mmm get to find out if i bombed my ASL III expressives test..yea.

ism
05-08-2003, 09:10 PM
Originally posted by artzygrrl@May 7 2003, 05:18 PM
"very nice work" in sign language?? or i'm imagining it.. sounds like english signs tho.... mmm get to find out if i bombed my ASL III expressives test..yea.
I'm learning ASL... starting with Signed English. Kinda glad the idea got across =)

Green_Jade
05-16-2003, 02:11 PM
yeah!!! *Deaf applause*

artsfartsyjanet
05-27-2003, 08:18 AM
i'm impressed! =) I love the meticulous details you have in all of your work. =) Thanks for giving us the opportunity to view them.