Pen Vs. Pencil

[contra_diction]

[written in pen]
I propose a ponderable pondering to ponder.
To pursue persistently and perhaps make you wonder.
To properly perceive this precipitated preemptive possibility one must play pretend.
(now humor me for a moment)
What if the pencil were to wage war with the pen?

girl i hope a nerve iz hit by deez wurdz so writ/ cos tha feelings i hab fa u are lyk a pen they're permanent/ u ask me y i'm so good 2 u, welz, iz bcos you've been earnin it/ fa tha past [her age] yrs gyrl u deserve dis shit!u give me tha urge ta spit & leev a microphone burned 2 bits/ if u can't tel by now, dis ryme ain't really 'bout a pen & pencil tournament/ not even 'bout a pen or a pencil/ i just wanted to connect on a mental level/ but i wanted to be subtle & do it gentle/ & so dis verse of "versus" metaphors wuz jes essential/
i could draw tha perfect female figure if i only had a [her name] stencil/ mm-mm grrl ur jes so Flipalicious [she's pinai]/ mi lil Mexican mistress [mixed with that]/ tha eye candy u give mi vision's so delicious/ if i lost mi arms & had no lips left i'd stil b dishin u hugz & kysses/ gyrl, iz Christmas & buhleev u me YOU'RE at tha very top-tippy-top uv mi wishlist/ & so wit' ink i sink Chop's [my alter ego] rawest thoughts dat i think/ into dis paper beverage i've mixed fa yoo 2 drink/ rhymed wine imbibed by ya mind 2 link/ ur heart wit' mine/ ur so smart & kind/ u make Darkness shine! it took me almost [my age] yrs but u weren't hard 2 find/ u part mi spine frum mi bodi & leev me paralyzed/ free 2 do wit' me as u wish but u end up being way too nice/ when u open ur lids i don' see a pair of eyez/ i c my own personal_paradise/
with you i wona
share my life/

I compose the prose in pen upon this pape/
The symbolism of this rhythm is cos mistakes I will not make/
The lead embed in a pencil is made to be erased/
But these words are meant to have permanence and on that is what pen is based/

[karizma]

awww thats sooo cute...wish a guy would write something for me haha

[contra_diction]

so you think she liked it!
here, this is for you....
so the lil lolita strikes again.?, huh/ deez rymes i type 2 send a/ lil Christmas cheer in tha hopes i might jes end tha/ wish u hab fo' a guy to write you something :) u should try 2 spread a lil love dis year & make a person happy hu might b suff'ring/ i feel so fortunate cos thangs r going so well fa me, i think Life jes loves me/ karizma got dat charisma & she looks quite tha opposite uv a sight daz ugly/ yellowworld inhabitants! we need to stick 2gether lyk biker buddies/ AZN Pryde & Joi 'til we're old and moldy lyk Rice daz fuzzy/ so yoo lick? i spit/ wit' wit we grip political shit daz writ n som uv deez forums/ burn our message lyk a candle wick wit' smoke so damm thick, u think They ken handle it? or should we warn 'em/ keep it yellow! not purple, blue, or orange/ we're comin' all tha way/ frum round tha world 2 come here and say wut we we're Called to say!but right now, to karizma and everbuddy else n yw Happy Holidays//
Frum
Chop
-Jae

[terence]

Cheers for exploring your ideas through the written word.

[contra_diction]

thank you terence

[taiwanchick]

Originally posted by contra_diction@Dec 25 2002, 12:48 PM
so you think she liked it!


Don't you know she did Contra? Anyways, ur shit is phat. I'ma share my stuff on here very soon too.. I knew I could find some spokenword/rappers in this place

[contra_diction]

hiya taiwanchick, thanks for the compliment. did you see A Lyrical Comparison... or Divine Diction. there are a couple of lyricists in yw, check out the gaming section and look under Battleflow. BaiginLong is another one that drops some fairly intelligent stuff. i'm excited to see what you have to bring to the creative table. 1!