haikus that don't make sense

[kasia]

i may have the rhythm wrong so feel free to correct me.

dance when storm hits the rain
how i long but wait.
fingers.

[SunWuKong]

um kasie i think it's supposed to be 5-7-5 syllables. someone correct me on this if i'm wrong.

that is not correct
five seven five syllables
is the correct way

[tapestrybabe]

Hey, does it matter?!
Silly, I liked her poem. :D
Abandon All Rules...

[kasia]

k, i'll try again.

******

dance when storm hits rain
leaves on branch tingles my hope
o your love drums smooth.

[kasia]

sorry--i just wanted to be a part of this forum but have no real talent <_<

[SunWuKong]

Originally posted by kasia@Sep 19 2002, 01:54 AM
sorry--i just wanted to be a part of this forum but have no real talent <_<
that's ok kasie. it only means that you've led a relatively untortured life. which is a very good thing.

[thaite]

What the fuck do you
know about being Asian,
you stupid bastard.

[achtungbaby]

Originally posted by buoywonder@Sep 19 2002, 02:41 PM
What the fuck do you
know about being Asian,
you stupid bastard.
Bwahahhaa, beautiful, beautiful...

[SunWuKong]

Originally posted by achtungbaby@Sep 19 2002, 08:04 PM
Originally posted by buoywonder@Sep 19 2002, 02:41 PM
What the fuck do you
know about being Asian,
you stupid bastard.
Bwahahhaa, beautiful, beautiful...
that is no haiku
show us your poetic side
oh dear webmaster

[Shuriken]

Sand covers barbed wire
The guard towers stand empty
Ghosts haunt the desert

[karizma]

eat me with gravy
spork chopstick or a dull knife
alien spaceship abducts

>> 0_o

[Chris]

oh please make me straight
girls more than guys kiss me good
hump me till no end.
:lol:

[kasia]

you guys are awesome :)
funny haikus you can too
silly you me laugh



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[karizma]

>> ahahah chris omg hahaha....my aunt thinks im one big freak for laughing out loud in front of the computer just now...

shakira so hot
but her voice make me throw up
drown her i will now

[artsfartsyjanet]

Originally posted by SunWuKung@Sep 19 2002, 02:16 AM
Originally posted by kasia@Sep 19 2002, 01:54 AM
sorry--i just wanted to be a part of this forum but have no real talent <_<
that's ok kasie. it only means that you've led a relatively untortured life. which is a very good thing.
I second that. :lol:

We're tortured people
who wallow in our poetry.
Be very afraid. :rolleyes:



<!--EDIT|artsfartsyjanet|Sep 22 2002, 04:48 PM-->

[tapestrybabe]

Singlehood i hate...
how long must i have to wait..
i'm available...

[SunWuKong]

Originally posted by tapestrybabe@Sep 22 2002, 11:34 PM
Singlehood i hate...
how long must i have to wait..
i'm available...
hahhah that's funny
hey don't worry about it
life has its answers

[mrazntre]

Pain alone subsides;
feelings drown, yet cannot hide,
past thoughts that belie.

[kasia]

Originally posted by mrazntre@Sep 23 2002, 08:33 AM
Pain alone subsides;
feelings drown, yet cannot hide,
past thoughts that belie.
your haiku not silly
that was the point of this thread
make silly haikus

:(

[SunWuKong]

Originally posted by kasia@Sep 23 2002, 10:55 AM
Originally posted by mrazntre@Sep 23 2002, 08:33 AM
Pain alone subsides;
feelings drown, yet cannot hide,
past thoughts that belie.
your haiku not silly
that was the point of this thread
make silly haikus

:(
the first line of your
haiku has six syllables
don't do that again

[kasia]

Originally posted by SunWuKung@Sep 23 2002, 03:57 PM
Originally posted by kasia@Sep 23 2002, 10:55 AM
Originally posted by mrazntre@Sep 23 2002, 08:33 AM
Pain alone subsides;
feelings drown, yet cannot hide,
past thoughts that belie.
your haiku not silly
that was the point of this thread
make silly haikus

:(
the first line of your
haiku has six syllables
don't do that again
ah! get off my back.
i do despise stringent rules.
i write as i want.

[SunWuKong]

Originally posted by kasia@Sep 23 2002, 11:00 AM
Originally posted by SunWuKung@Sep 23 2002, 03:57 PM
Originally posted by kasia@Sep 23 2002, 10:55 AM
Originally posted by mrazntre@Sep 23 2002, 08:33 AM
Pain alone subsides;
feelings drown, yet cannot hide,
past thoughts that belie.
your haiku not silly
that was the point of this thread
make silly haikus

:(
the first line of your
haiku has six syllables
don't do that again
ah! get off my back.
i do despise stringent rules.
i write as i want.
that is ironic
since you once again adhere
to rules of haiku

[mrazntre]

it is silly girl
because it's coming from me
so shut the fuck up

[kasia]

Originally posted by mrazntre@Sep 24 2002, 01:39 AM
it is silly girl
because it's coming from me
so shut the fuck up
you are such a jerk
do not tell me to shut up
smile my little friend

***************
smile = one-syllable word

[SunWuKong]

i always wonder
if haikus sound better in
japanese instead

because consonant
differences they might sound weird
being in english

[mrazntre]

sensitive you are
but you have no emotion
don't front like you do

[Shuriken]

HAIKU

5
7
5


:lol:

[Shuriken]

Originally posted by tapestrybabe@Sep 23 2002, 04:34 AM
Singlehood i hate...
how long must i have to wait..
i'm available...
Do the work you love
Feel good just being yourself
You'll find your soulmate


(Er...that made sense, didn't it? Sorry...)

[mrazntre]

play jump westside drop
gunshot bang bang hear the glock
bloodshed your heart stops

[Chris]

three days with no sleep
make Chris very grumpy man
kill me please kill me.

[kasia]

Originally posted by mrazntre@Sep 26 2002, 08:13 AM
play jump westside drop
gunshot bang bang hear the glock
bloodshed your heart stops
impressive haiku
it rhymed, made sense, and was coo'
just a little dark

[Arex]

I'm very faded...
I should be asleep by now...
But Yellowworld calls!

RX

[Arex]

Why am I still up?
Time to go to sleep, Arex.
Okay, good night all!

RX

[Shuriken]

Artsfartsyjanet
New avatar disappoints
Let's see your face please