night will end

[karizma]

http://www.karizma77.net/images/eyep.jpg

>> didnt really put any effort into the design...i just wanted a backround for the poem so i used one of my doodles...lemme know what you think...tah tah...

[tapestrybabe]

i am not really sure the exact meaning behind this poem. It's kinda abstract to me... but i like the imagery that goes along with it. The darkness... than the small twinkle of light... and than a big burst of explosion... and than back to the darkness and stillness again. To me it kinda has a somber feel to it all...

Anyways, as for your design part... its an interesting abstract doodle... and your use of color that you used for your poem... it seems all bright and cheerful... And I was thinking.. maybe you could do like what SWK does... like kinda have your design go along with the theme of your poem... like visually, it looks all vibrant.. but your words.. they convey a different feeling..

Anyhow, those are just my thoughts... and yeah, your poem.. I like it :)

[SunWuKong]

nice poem! it conveys a very good sense of imagery!

hey you might like this poem by Percy Bysshe Shelley (my favorite poet).

http://www.library.utoronto.ca/utel/rp/poe...shelley10b.html (http://www.library.utoronto.ca/utel/rp/poems/shelley10b.html)

[karizma]

>> thank you thank you...after i created the image u see there i realize that pink wasnt the best choice for my text..oops...oh well...i made it in 5 mins haha...just a buncha copy pasting...ill improve it later when i post it up on my site.

[Chris]

It so pretty karizma, great poem! Wheeee!!